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Time to fly... |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Time to fly? Against the wind led by my pain Just had to reach a familiar place And the dark sky that hangs above Seem warmer than you do Still when I lay on I bed I recall your words Someone glimpsed sadness in my eyes As I turned away I could see, You so happy in your wedding dress In a flash came before to me Someone must have cast a spell But then you’re gone now And so it’s too late This time my insanity diverts the pain But where have we reached? Until then the wind help me To spread my wings to take off For I must soar higher But what if I fall? And what if I rise? If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Wonderful poem Avanti...very well written and expressed. Keep it up!  Yours truly, Angel "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Damn good, kid. You let one go to. this is a good expression. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh, I love this, "what if I fail what if I rise" perfect, perfect ending Kathleen |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thanx angel,joeland kathleen glad you all liked it : ) see you around If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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