Dark Poetry #1 |
Sadness of my life |
Kurly Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48 |
What did I do to deserve this? I have done them no wrong... They berate and criticise me, when there is nothing to criticise or berate about me. They do not have the confidence to beleive in themselves, so they pick on me. What an irony, because I feel that they have things I want. I hope someday that I might find the peace I wish for. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Great poem Kurly! You just have to stay true to yourself and learn to be happy with who you are. Ignore them and they'll leave you alone. The force is with you my friend. lol...ignore me...I'm really hyper right now. But anywayz...excellent poem! Btw - Welcome to Dark Passions! Yours truly, Angel "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I loved this poem. And here it tells of such the truth that people that belittle others are really not happy with themselves...which in turn, makes them feel a bit better to put others down. I too hope that you find your peace. |
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MerritW Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33Texas |
I'm glad I got the chance to read that. It was great. *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wonderful Poem Kurly, Oh does this tell the Tale of my Junior High years...stay strong and you'll find peace. Hang in there. Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Wishful thinking my friend, but peace and freedom's an ilussion. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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sweetchild Junior Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 37 |
Such an honest veiw of things. Good poem. I hope you find that peace. |
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DarkAnjl Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17 |
Well you don't know me Kurly but I do believe fully in the fact that you WILL find peace . I think your poem is wonderful. I know how it feels to be in that place. Anjl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sadly I relate to this well, I don't understand why poeple have to do this. Those who do this are obviously not happy and have to make others unhappy as well and they get enjoyment out of it ~HUG~ Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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