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SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
0 posted 2000-04-22 05:33 PM

~Trudging Along~

Trudging through it all
through life with you
in this tiny space
no air
can't breathe
scents overcome
overbearing my everything
restricting movement
choices left
decisions unmade
forgotten
light headed we sleep
through time
through it all
tiny broken place
broken bodies and souls
altered minds
with no air
scents, inscents
taking over
taking me
with you
trudging along
trying desperately
to run
to escape
to escape it all
to escape you.
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Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263
1 posted 2000-04-22 08:49 PM

I know when I can't escape I run to my words, and there I find release. This was deep and thought provoking...

 Kathleen
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-23 01:38 AM

I agree with I. R. writing has been a salvation for me.  Run to that, your good.
Joel.


 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.
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