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isiskate81
Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31


0 posted 2000-04-21 11:48 AM



The day you left i cried for hours
I didn't sleep and when i did i dreamed of you,
i dreamed of your voice,
your hugs
you kisses
I soon stopped sleeping,
I would lie in bed crying,
and think of you,
my lost love,
You were my happiness,
you were my life,
you were my reason to live,
I know it will take time to heal
but what am i supposed to do till then
cry for you at night
pray I'll never have to see you with someone else
or die???
i know i love you to no end but
i will live my life with out you.
i have to



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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
1 posted 2000-04-21 12:29 PM


man what a feeling to have that void within you that just won't quit. how is it a hole where there once was something hurts more than when it was there?  cry cry cry and cry again i say... only way it will finally be slowly ebbed away.  by the way, welcome to dark passions!!!!!!!  

*****kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

Kurly
Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48

2 posted 2000-04-21 12:31 PM


Dear fellow poet,
What a poem!!!! I swear you must've written about me an my lost love! i couldn't think of anything but us when reading. I would give it a 5 star rating!

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
3 posted 2000-04-21 03:04 PM


Dear isiskate,
  Wonderful poem...a perfect expression of heartbreak. Looking forward to more from you.

               Yours truly,
                  Angel


 "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun

~*Angel of Darkness*~


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-04-21 07:17 PM


You have the same night's I have kid.
You are not alone, We at passions know this.
If I missed your first post this is a
Heart felt Welcome from me.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2000-04-21 07:52 PM


welcome to passions! You have found a group of compassionate, honest, caring people, of whom I know I couldn't be without!
keep up the good work!

 Kathleen


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