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Isis
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0 posted 2000-04-19 08:16 PM


Joel my online Dad challenge me to write a poem for him.  About a new member joining passions, she has problems similar to mine, so what would Isis tell this new member to do?   It's a toughie Joel, but here I go.

Dear One,
I feel your pain,
I know that suffering well,
Don't sit idly by and let it destroy you,
There are ways to exorcise those demons, listen well!

Look around you and SEE who really cares,
Share with them your secrets, your innermost fears,
Those that love you will stand by you,
Comforting arms in which to hide, and shed those tears.

You've always tried to be the strong one,
Always there for anyone when needed,
Now it is time to rekindle your flame,
Please don't let my words go unheeded.

For of course you must look out for No. 1,
And bank the internal flames,
So your beautiful light won't waver,
And leave you feeling this way again.

Embrace those friends and loved ones,
They are there for you as you were for them,
And you may forge new and wonderful friendships,
If only you let them in.


Well 'Dad' what do you think??????   *hugs*  Isis


 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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Joel the wolf
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Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-19 09:29 PM


Well Isis the all knowing and all wise, I think you gave her some very good advise, and some ways to go to accomplish a rekindled internal flame.
"Please don't let my words go unheeded"
I think if she follows these words she will pull herself out of the damn slump she has dug.?? hahaha
I also think that the person your talking to is a very complex woman with the world on her shoulders, but we all seem to carry some of this around, just hoping she takes your words to heart and keeps coming back to listen to what you have to say to her.
Love you kid.
Dad.
Joel. hahaha

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
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2 posted 2000-04-19 09:35 PM


Those words never go unheeded, eventually I listen and steer onto track again.
Love you too hon and thanks *hugs*

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-04-20 05:05 AM


Isis~
Your words have been said so beautifully and great advice given.
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Isis
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4 posted 2000-04-20 06:45 PM


Thanks Tracie)

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-04-20 11:16 PM


and I say ISIS is very wise and sincere...
and she should take her own advice...
cause no one knows her better than herself
did i make any sense here LOL
perfect ISIS...
your should start a Dark Forum Advice post...
call it
"What would Isis say" LOL
take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



Sven
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6 posted 2000-04-21 12:10 PM


Sven says, "Isis, you should look around and see that you have friends that care about you and want you to be ok. . . "

Sven also says, "Isis should listen to Janet, because she has hit the nail on the head. . ."

Now, sit on the floor. . .UH-UH!!  Sven didn't say!!LOL

Wonderful poem, my friend. . . when's that column coming out?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-04-21 01:27 AM


I love the idea of what Isis what say column or forum, but this is Ron's world not mine, ask him if you want, but I don't think it's in the making for his images of passions.
Thanks everyone I love you guys  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
8 posted 2000-04-21 09:50 AM


well written ISIS
I sure he's(dad) proud


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Isis
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Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
9 posted 2000-04-21 06:28 PM


Thanks Avanti, he liked it yes  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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