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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The darkness is immense The pain is so intense Nothing makes sense No more suspense Time isn't on my side No where to hide I must abide Have no pride You won't stay No other way Run out of days No more plays We must part Broke my heart Things to impart Make a new start I will go Must say no No more woe Gone so low The tears stream No more gleam Nothing as seems End of dream Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Another Powerfully Sad Poem. End of this Dream Perhaps, but another one will surface*S* Daniel |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I have to agree with Daniel on this one. . . sometimes, it's just over and you have to move on. . . to let it go. . . Excellent poem.. . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
(and they all lived happily ever after?) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Fairytales are not realities some endings suck!!! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Well my dream ended to. I hope your days are better. I'm glad you can put it here. Have faith. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Daniel......thank you and yes, very sad. I know there is another dream out there for me...just have to find it. Sven.....thanks. I thought you'd agree with Daniel. I know the time has come to let go. I think it is best for all involved... serenity.....not here they don't!! LOL Isis.....this was not a fairy tale and yes, some endings do suck. Well said!! Sorry to say, this is my life. I know I have a future waiting for me. When one door closes, another door opens. Just have to find it. Joel....trying to have faith. Sorry yours ended too. I know it is what's best in the long run. Very glad to have a place to express it. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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