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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-04-20 10:19 PM


You say I don't want to spend time with you
But that's not true
You say I can't wait for you to go
My reply is no

You say I will try to hurt you
But that's not true
I'll be sad when you go
I'm not that low

You say I tell lies about you
But that's not true
You don't even know
That would be low

You say I have no clue
But that's not true
Take this real slow
Go with the flow

The demons are slew
Could it be true
I saw the glow
Of your mighty bow

Through the morning dew
I know 'tis true
Take away my woe
Please do not go


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer L. Garcia - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-04-21 12:43 PM


Don't lose sight of your hope--love is a wind, if caught in trap, soon it dies therein...  love your work...
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-21 02:46 AM


I have tried this cry, and it doesn't work.
But good luck to kid.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
3 posted 2000-04-21 09:51 AM


sometimes it's better to just go...
so let it go...
you'll be fine...
just trust yourself...
well written

 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-04-23 09:33 PM


serenity....thanks for saying you love my work.  Very nice of you.  The hope is gone for the one this was written for.

Joel....thanks for the luck, but you are right....it doesn't work and isn't working.  Came to the conclusion, time to move on.

AVANTI.....I am letting go and going on.  I know I will be fine.  Have more strength than I thought.  Thank you!!!


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

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