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Dark Poetry #1

Man On A Ledge

Forrest Cain
Member

since 2000-04-21

Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA

0 posted 2000-04-23 12:56 PM

Man On A Ledge

without expression
  he steps
        from the edge
                    and falls
   silhouetting
     the lonliness
            of the city
     in perfect
         understanding
            of
              the
                 night.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-04-23 01:56 AM

In that perfect understanding let him have wings.
Short and good.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-04-23 09:32 AM

~Well done,...I liked this poem and the poetic fashion it was written in.(posted).

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-04-23 12:44 PM

and there is so much non expression to loneliness.....this was perfect in expression!

Kathleen

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-04-23 07:56 PM

Like Joel I like to think he had wings and didn't fall but flew away from his misery..
Welcome by the way

A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

5 posted 2000-04-23 11:19 PM

Nicely done. Enjoyed.

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