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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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Mistakes choking as I swallow Shadowed by a past too bleak All the while we search for A future ruptured by the past,now weak I have to admit I don't want you Or do I? Where do we go from here A blank page would be nice Starting over again throws us Just like starting over twice I have to admit I don't need you Or do I? Plumeting downwards so destructively Heading straight for disaster is where we went It turned all the best laid plans into ashes It took us to the point of totally spent I have to admit I no longer care Or do I? Admitting we needed help was the hardest thing to do, Facing the graven images casting failure of me and you! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Very Good Post. I like how you put "Or Do I?" question in there. Good Job dhuron The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
this is great work here. may i say the first step is admitting it. none of the steps are easy... but hey, then it wouldn't be worth it!!!!! strength i send to you, my fellow poet. *****kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And I send understanding too!! You'll get there... A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I've been on the other side of this Or do I. it's now a fun place to be. a great post. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
dhuron.......Thank you for the words of praise! I am glad you enjoyed the question element too, boy isn't life full of those kinds of questions????  kynder.......Thank you so much for your words of courage and support. This place is a haven for us that realize pain is a real part of life. I wholeheartedly accept the strength! Isis....WOW understanding!!!! How I wish more people would keep that close to their hearts, and try more to understand others. I appreciate your encouragement in every way. Joel the wolf......this one brought a giggle to me! You seem to have that affect on me!! STOP THAT.....OR DO I WANT YOU TOO???? I am ready to be on the other side, I think? Thanks for the insight once again. |
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