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eegood
Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41
Chicago,IL

0 posted 2000-04-20 01:35 PM


I LAUGH TO KEEP FROM CRYING
So much pain, so much suffering, so much personal strife
So much anguish that occurs in everyday life
That sollicits a grimace, and wincing looks about the eyes
Unwelcome signs of life that are met with dispise
Woe is me, for at times I'm burdened with dispair
And burried deep inside is hurt, that with no one, I will share
For private is my pain and my personal space
But you'd never know that I'm hurting, judging from the look on my face
I wail and trevail,... I silently lament
Allowing my eyes to become rain clouds as I tearfully stream and vent
Catching in the corner of my mouth the salty taste,...
Of bitter tears, of inner jeers and overwhelming emotional haste
Weeping on the inside while facing tribulation trials
All masked behind a pleasant demeanor, and a smile
And if you were to ask me about my constant laughter,... in sighing
I'd tell you, in all honesty,... I laugh to keep from crying



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kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
1 posted 2000-04-20 02:24 PM


oh sweetie.  man i have tasted too many of my own tears.  this is great work here. i hope it is helping you release some of that pain.
may i say God works thru tears, that is when He is closest to you.  so it's ok to cry. even for days, weeks, hopefully not months!!    

*****kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

DarkEnchantress's BF
New Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 8

2 posted 2000-04-20 04:55 PM


I'm gonna go with kynder on this...
Crying helps you release all that anguish and emotional torchure...
Take it from me..
Hiding it will only make you worse..
it could get to the point where you can't cry at all
Which believe me is so much worse.
Excellent poem though...
and I hope it helped you somewhat.


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-21 02:02 AM


I'm with you I laugh also, ?? now I howl. yes that's it. anyway this is a great way to express a ?? man's point of view.
We have been tought not to cry.
I have broken the rules.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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