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Candii
New Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 1


0 posted 2000-04-20 01:22 AM


Sinful as chocolate
and delicate as a rose
Feelings untouched,
never introduced to anyone

Looking into your eyes
to see you for who you are
Reaching out and touching
but never getting close

Crack of your smile
brings warmness to my heart
Always appreciating life or
what life means to you

But living life is breathing
life and taking in life, and
feeling life, and hurting from
life, being life

Because living without
breathing is not living
at all


© Copyright 2000 Candii - All Rights Reserved
Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
1 posted 2000-04-20 02:59 AM


Welcome to Passions Candii! This was an excellent first post. Keep it up.  

              Yours truly,
                 Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~



tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-04-20 05:19 AM


Candii~
Welcome, you have written a very good piece and I enjoyed it very much.
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-04-20 07:01 PM


Welcome Candii.  Love the title of this poem reminded me of the line from the movie 'Ever After'.  Wonderful first post, I'll be looking for your next  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
4 posted 2000-04-21 02:12 AM


Because living without
breathing is not living
at all"

The passion in life
Ah.
Joel.


 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
5 posted 2000-04-21 02:20 AM


Candii~ Welcome!! this is so true, I enjoyed this..... very nice. -SEA
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