Dark Poetry #1 |
Just Breathe |
Candii New Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 1 |
Sinful as chocolate and delicate as a rose Feelings untouched, never introduced to anyone Looking into your eyes to see you for who you are Reaching out and touching but never getting close Crack of your smile brings warmness to my heart Always appreciating life or what life means to you But living life is breathing life and taking in life, and feeling life, and hurting from life, being life Because living without breathing is not living at all |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Welcome to Passions Candii! This was an excellent first post. Keep it up. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Candii~ Welcome, you have written a very good piece and I enjoyed it very much. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Candii. Love the title of this poem reminded me of the line from the movie 'Ever After'. Wonderful first post, I'll be looking for your next A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Because living without breathing is not living at all" The passion in life Ah. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Candii~ Welcome!! this is so true, I enjoyed this..... very nice. -SEA |
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