Engulfing Fire (answer to Isis's Challenge)

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dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

0 posted 2000-04-17 04:01 PM

My heart had been locked,
for years, perhaps
countless lifetimes
not allowing one to touch it

The key was thrown far away,
buried, thought lost
in the folds of time.
Now, all has changed.

Passion overcomes,
consuming the soul...
in an agonizing pleasure
never known before...

The consuming fire,
burns with intensity that
would send the mighty Phoenix
away, burning with agony.

The key has been found...
the one has only turned it a notch.
Only a little crack in
the dam.

Passion infects the mind as
the vision of the meeting
flashes before my eyes...
the body trembles.

Under the starry night, the moon shines down
on the two, standing in front of each other...
so close, not touching; yet feeling
the heat radiating from each other.

Eyes peering into the souls...
as the fire builds to immeasurable intensity
hearing every breath, the body quivers
as the soul burns with passion

Passion and desire so great,
Aphrodite bows in awe
as she feels the burn
and is overwhelmed

My hand moves to touch the one,
all the passion and heat moving
into my hand, radiating
as all feel the force.

I touch the one,
as the explosion of passion,
thought to consume the soul,
as the earth trembles.

I brush against those lips,
Heat that would burn the sun
the body falters
from the ecstasy of a single touch.

I go to taste
those erotic lips,
as the sun rises in
the distance, the one leaves

All that heat and passion
with just a crack in the damn.
How I welcome the apocalyptic
passion and fire, once the key is turned

For the Phoenix burning fire
of passion burns all,
Untamable
The flames cannot be put out

No amount of water
can cool the fire
only make it stronger
and more consuming

Death can not end
the fire, as it
will return to
Karma’s Circle

Building in force
awaiting for the one
to release it
for now the key is found.

I await patiently
for the one, with my key
to finish unlocking the fire
as it radiates like
that of the Phoenix.

The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-04-17 05:05 PM

This is outstanding my friend, your passion over rides the cyber unites to get here.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

2 posted 2000-04-18 09:52 AM

not often i say this but WOW so much raw emotion driving onwards. Outstanding power in the words and again WOW

Walter

Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

3 posted 2000-04-20 01:32 PM

Thank You two for the wonderful replies. Kinda overtaken that you two seem to really Like this one.

Daniel

The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-04-20 07:31 PM

This is awesome my friend!!!!! Wonderful, untapped passion just waiting and wanting...
Great work

A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

5 posted 2000-04-20 11:53 PM

Thank you Isis. REally REALLY glad you liked this one.

Daniel

The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

6 posted 2000-04-20 11:55 PM

d~
I don't think I would want to be standing near when that key is finally turned full circle for the explosion will be enormous.
Liked this very much, very intense and passionate.
Just wonderful

Tracie~

Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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