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DarkEnchantress's BF
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since 2000-04-20
Posts 8


0 posted 2000-04-20 02:56 AM


~~~ Hey peplz, this is actually me...Angel...but my bf wrote a poem tonight and I asked him if I could post it here and he said yes. I'm hoping he'll do it more often. Well anywayz...here ya go. ~~~

Her voice so relieving
that my heart could tell
it's not decieving
Her face that of an angel's,
When I see her
my heart turns
so it gets into tangles
Her eyes of the purest color,
that have the love
you'd expect from a mother
Yet with her smile so sweet,
I thank God for the day
I'll get to meet
the girl who stole my heart
So we won't have to any longer
be apart




 

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dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

1 posted 2000-04-20 01:25 PM


Such a Lovely Poem.  Good catch you have there.  

Daniel

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


xEmperorEmber
Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136
tx
2 posted 2000-04-20 01:26 PM


Nice work there Greg, looking forward to seeing some more out of ya.

Ember

DarkEnchantress's BF
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since 2000-04-20
Posts 8

3 posted 2000-04-20 04:33 PM


Thank you both very much for your encouraging words.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-04-20 07:28 PM


Hang onto this one, he sounds like a sweetie AND he can write!! Well done  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-04-21 02:14 AM


A romantic, yes keep him.
He feel seperation, and want's union.
This is good.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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with you
6 posted 2000-04-21 02:18 AM


This is wonderful!! -SEA
Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
7 posted 2000-04-21 03:06 AM


Thanks guys!!! I really appreciate it!

               Lots a Luv 4 Ya,
                    Angel


 "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun

~*Angel of Darkness*~


DarkAnjl
Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17

8 posted 2000-04-22 05:22 PM


Oh this is Beautiful!!!! I knew ya had it in ya! Hope to see some more of them!
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