Dark Poetry #1 |
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DarkEnchantress's BF New Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 8 |
~~~ Hey peplz, this is actually me...Angel...but my bf wrote a poem tonight and I asked him if I could post it here and he said yes. I'm hoping he'll do it more often. Well anywayz...here ya go. ~~~ Her voice so relieving that my heart could tell it's not decieving Her face that of an angel's, When I see her my heart turns so it gets into tangles Her eyes of the purest color, that have the love you'd expect from a mother Yet with her smile so sweet, I thank God for the day I'll get to meet the girl who stole my heart So we won't have to any longer be apart |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Such a Lovely Poem. Good catch you have there. Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Nice work there Greg, looking forward to seeing some more out of ya. Ember |
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DarkEnchantress's BF New Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 8 |
Thank you both very much for your encouraging words. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hang onto this one, he sounds like a sweetie AND he can write!! Well done ![]() A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
A romantic, yes keep him. He feel seperation, and want's union. This is good. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is wonderful!! ![]() |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thanks guys!!! I really appreciate it! Lots a Luv 4 Ya, Angel "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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DarkAnjl Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17 |
Oh this is Beautiful!!!! I knew ya had it in ya! Hope to see some more of them! |
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