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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
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0 posted 2000-04-20 02:34 PM


Rainbow for two please,
The couple joyfully teased!!

Promises staring out through new lover's eyes,
That they would never make each other cry.
Colorful array of love splashed for all to see,
Two hearts joined by their devoted decree.
Bands of gold sealing their perfect kiss,
Whisking  them off to islands of bliss.

Rushing away to paradise's new born start,
Searching while clinging to each others heart.
Rainbows shining through their lover's eyes,
They vowed to not ever make  each other cry.
Undaunted by the forecast for stormy weather ahead,
This lover and beloved cling to the promise they said.

Bright colors fill their world so completely this cheerful day,
They drink in the sunlight and believe it will always stay.
Clouds do not darken their hopes for a love that is true,
Misting droplets only makes them giddy instead of blue.
True love with many colors around,
They are so happy that they have  found!

Rainbows of promise,
Sealed with a kiss!!!


© Copyright 2000 Lynne - All Rights Reserved
DarkEnchantress's BF
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since 2000-04-20
Posts 8

1 posted 2000-04-20 04:48 PM


Hey Illusion,
Absolutely beautiful poem here.
Very well written and expressed.
I like the way you worked the theme too.
Well done.

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-21 01:58 AM


Promises, promises, promises,
I wish they come true.
anyway a good way of expressing love. and hope.
well displayed.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-04-21 10:53 AM


Illusion~
What a read, exquisite.
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest
4 posted 2000-04-23 08:21 PM


DarkEnchantress's BF......Thanks for realizing the "theme"!!  I wondered if anyone would catch it!  Thank you for your glowing compliment too!


Joel the wolf.......boy the games we play huh??  Those promises just roll from our lips with all of the best intentions.  Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.  


tracie66.......It is so wonderful when someone personally enjoys  a read!!! Thanks for letting me know.  

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