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Kurly
Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48


0 posted 2000-04-22 08:09 PM



  I miss her with all my heart,
my love will be forever, never
ending and always remaining.
  I dream of when we were together,
the best of times were with you,
the worst without.
  I miss you, yet I know it's not
to be, but I still pray.
  I will always be waiting for you,
here inside my heart.

© Copyright 2000 Kurly - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-04-22 08:13 PM


~Aaawww...that's the sweetest.  Sounds like somebody's missing out.
tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-04-23 01:14 AM


Kurly~
such a longing in this, sooo sad  
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-23 02:00 AM


Yes I agree with tracie66 it is sad.
And remember some day you might want to fill that cup of your's up, and what will you do when it is already full of memories? The new will not have room to fit in.
Joel.

Kurly
Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 48

4 posted 2000-04-24 01:29 PM


Thank you all for your compliments.
The cup isn't full but is poisned with bitterness of loss.

Tess
Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 288
Australia
5 posted 2000-04-24 01:39 PM


Yes loss is bitter, but the best revenge is to love again  
And it was a sad and touching poem  

 "Love is the only drug you can take that will convince you each time
that you've never had it before."
~author unknown~



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