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HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada

0 posted 2000-04-18 10:32 PM


Time is my frustration
Impatience my maddness
The unkown being my insanity

I relish all that is simple
Envy those with control
Desire all to be perfect

I am weak
I am strong
I am lost


This is all I've been able to put together so far.
I suppose I'm not as complex as I'd like to think I was!

 The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere.
Mute.
Made dumb by my own thoughts.
Tonguetied and awkward.
Tripping over my own voice.
A pen and paper for my voice.

HelenaJ

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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-04-18 11:13 PM


Well I liked it Helena!  Here's a couple more ideas to add to the list..
What about..
Fearless yet terrorised
Loud yet silent
Angry but yet your love knows no boundaries
etc.
What do you think?

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-19 01:43 AM


I for one hate to group anyone, but I believe every woman on this planet of ours, has complexities, And that ant bad.
And a poet to?? you say your not complex that in it's self is complex. haha...
I've enjoyed your work kid.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kittyj
Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32
CANADA
3 posted 2000-04-19 09:03 AM


It would be so easy to be simple, and be satisfied by taking things on the surface, not trying to go beneath.  I guess that is part of the torture, simplicity would probably drive me insane, even though at times I envy simplicity. The need to push the boundaries that I see in you, and the few others like you, inspires me to no end.
thanks kiddo.
kj

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