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Dark Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18Oviedo, FL, USA |
My sad story told in my eyes...and heart enjoy!: Loves sweet song holding my head up high Life as complex as the great owls story But in your eyes it's as simple as dancing in the percipitation of blissful souls Away from you it starts to darken into a light of a shy candle swaying in the wind that is kept far into your soul So I am forced to follow by the hipmitism of your love My heart left bestowing to you the unknown for the illusion of a false tear -Dark Usagi- P.S. Thanks for listening...I know it's short but... sometimes things should be short... for hope that maybe one day people could explain things in few words "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
My last relationaship went like this one, Dark. I really enjoyed reading this because I could feel the words stirring emotions in my heart. Great piece. sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
Very eloquently put. You have a great way with words. Thanks for sharing. The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere. Mute. Made dumb by my own thoughts. Tonguetied and awkward. Tripping over my own voice. A pen and paper for my voice. HelenaJ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes short and good, I tend to poetic novels, trying to shorting them. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ah, may have been short but definately got the point across. Strong poem. Liked it much. Welcome to Dark Passions, btw. Hope to see more from you soon. Michael |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wonderful Post Dark. Enjoyed it a lot |
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