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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-04-18 02:47 PM


hollow could describe
never felt so empty everywhere
inside..and like the ridicule
may they always serve.. the only question
how do you live beneath your nerve
leaving is always open..for the things
no longer protected by lies
pray the broken bones of spite
help me find a home tonight..



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Hope, tears, and renewal
Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

1 posted 2000-04-18 08:41 PM


"Hollow" really could describe it, couldn't it.  Once the lies go away, you're out there by your self.  Good luck, stay strong.  You've got it in you.
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
2 posted 2000-04-18 09:30 PM


Yes Hollow
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
3 posted 2000-04-18 11:01 PM


Hollow indeed! Hollow I feel.
Thanks

helena

 The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere.
Mute.
Made dumb by my own thoughts.
Tonguetied and awkward.
Tripping over my own voice.
A pen and paper for my voice.

HelenaJ

HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
4 posted 2000-04-18 11:02 PM


Hollow indeed! Hollow I feel.
Thanks

helena

 The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere.
Mute.
Made dumb by my own thoughts.
Tonguetied and awkward.
Tripping over my own voice.
A pen and paper for my voice.

HelenaJ

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-04-18 11:15 PM


I'm hollow too!  So hollow I hear many echoes of past love, feelings, fears and tears.  Well done  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-04-19 02:38 AM


some things are so tasty one comes back for a second helping...(smile)

take care, jm

 Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders
And it makes me want to touch you there.
And the light in your eyes makes me feel
Like there's something much better out there
Something kind...
And I know someday I might be looking around
Trying to find some purpose
Well purpose it can't be that hard to find
As long as I've got the wind...
The wind and your love to carry me.
vertical horizon



kittyj
Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32
CANADA
7 posted 2000-04-19 08:57 AM


Jackal, you are truly excellent.  I will wrap your words around me to muffle the echoes.
thanks.

kj

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