Dark Poetry #1 |
Shortly After Midnight |
eegood Junior Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 41Chicago,IL |
Shortly After Midnight into your room I go And stand there gazing down at you with eyes that love you so Your head upon the pillow your arms down at your side your lips in faint smile then next to you I slide I kiss your eyelids softly run fingers through your hair I feel your breath upon me do you know I'm there? I put my arms around you and hold you, oh so dear I whisper of my love for you Although you cannot hear I cherish ever moment as I hold you close, my dear for times goes by so quickly and morning's almost near Tho' you won't know that I've been there with you throughout the night My love for you is ever close.. as darkness is to light |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
This is my favorite time to be with someone. Sweet words.Loved it helena |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I have talked to my love many nights while she lay sleeping, saying my heart to her. And leaving long before she awakes. She say's she dreams of my voice. How little she know's. But that ant bad. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is so smooth and beautiful...seems to be a song. James |
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isiskate81 Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
Its a beautiful to know that someone can be so close to someone and love them like that. Its a great poem. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Touching, passionate and beautiful~ Sweet poem, loved it very much. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Perfect poem of love! Excellent job on expressing these deep feelings. Thanx for sharing. Peace I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Oh, I caught chills reading this. A most excellent work here. Kudos. Michael |
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