Dark Poetry #1 |
Could this be you? |
Desire New Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 2California, USA |
Could this be you? The man that while I'm away from it all would sweep me off my feet... The man who accepted me and made me feel whole... The perfect man. Just eye contact alone sent a surge up my spine and back down to my pelvis area. Though we've never really met, No other man fits this description. Could this be you? The man whom I continuously had an affair with... But would you consider it an affair? After all, we've never had sex... We've never kissed... We've never even spoken to one another. But in my own mind, we've done all this and much more. Could this be you? The man whom I constantly dream about... The man who appears out of the darkness holding roses... The man who I spent many nights with, Just holding one another in an everlasting embrace. Too good to be true... Yes, this is you. [This message has been edited by Desire (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Welcome to Dark Passions! Beautiful poem Desire...I like the way it all came together. Yours truly, Angel "A man's fate is a man's fate and life is but an illusion." -Shogun ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Desire, and your 'desire' for love and comfort are more than evident in this one. Great work A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Welcome dear lady, If I were him I'd lay at your feet. Drink wine from your glass, and share heart felt songs only loving souls could hear. Enjoy your stay. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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DarkAnjl Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 17 |
Wonderfully written. It makes you feel. I like that!!! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to the forum! This was great, I followed each line wanting to know more!!! Looking forward to reading more. Kathleen |
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