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Dark Usagi
Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18
Oviedo, FL, USA

0 posted 2000-04-18 09:09 AM


I give you my heart with all my soul

I swear by the silver lining of heaven I will always be there, I shall be forever yours

Take my soul in return don't let it stray from the beauty of your eyes

Your voice like the sweet melody above the moutain top

Your soul as bright as the sun yet it's darkness only holds more sweetness

Your eyes as deep as the ocean, I can still see my surrendored self in their reflections
Share this bliss with humanity Show the weak the strong and what they could be
Prove to the dark that there is always light and  together we shall prove to the hurt there are always scars...but even they heal...


 "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi

© Copyright 2000 Dark Usagi - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-18 09:34 AM


I have said this before that there is light in the dark, we just refuse to see.
And the scars are there, and together you can heal.
This is beautiful I liked the
" it's darkness only holds more sweetness"
This is true.
Great works kid. hahah hhhooowwwlll
Joel.
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 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

[This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 04-18-2000).]

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