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My senses disillusioned
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My senses disillusioned |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
I am in a state Blurred eyes and empty hands Thoughts dancing Emotions that lay still in my belly Every breath a plea for something more and with every rythmic beat comes a desire i no longer understand I hear only emptiness Tastebuds crave a sweetness they have never known I am In a state The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere. Mute. Made dumb by my own thoughts. Tonguetied and awkward. Tripping over my own voice. A pen and paper for my voice. HelenaJ |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
This is great!! The entire body craving something it doesn't know, what could it be??? Daniel |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Incredible entry, HelenaJ. We never really know what state we're in, do we? |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Great work I agree, But, from what you said here, "comes a desire i no longer understand" You did know it at one point? and now not! and the desire to, "Tastebuds crave a sweetness they have never known" You must have an Idea. Good luck searching. Anyway, great work again. Joel. hahaha I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
Thank you Daniel and HTR for your kind words and in response to you joel; I think my desire has significantly canged and the sweetness I crave has not presented itself in any sort of healthy form. i have loved. I need now only be loved with the same conviction. Thank you though for those words of encouragement. The search continues!!!!! |
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kittyj Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32CANADA |
"Tastebuds crave a sweetness they have never known", I totally dig that. What they craved before, was not real and true, just emptiness. And the feeling that went along with it, was always gone by sunrise. I will be there to listen to the birds in the morning with a clear mind and soul, oh I am learning so much from you sista. |
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Dark Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18Oviedo, FL, USA |
I totally LOVE this! I hate the feeling you are feeling and if you ever wanna talk you know where I am. And for whoever did this to you didn't deserve you in the first place and you probley curse the day you met them as I do. But I am sure you will get over them soon... "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi |
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