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isiskate81 Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
What I Wanted I wanted to tell you, but the words weren't right I wanted to tell you, I like you alot I wanted to tell you, I'll always be there for you I wanted to love you, but i was scared I wanted to love you, but i didn't want to get attached I wanted to love you, but i didn't know how What I wanted, I'll never get |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
You want to love, but you don't want to end up loosing in the end right? Good poem to start out, hopefuly, a long stay at Dark Passions. Welcome to the family isiskate! Joy |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
very haunting for me. expressive, short, moving. Good. hahaha Just like a man leaving all the feelings out. And yes a Howwwllling Welcome Joel. < !signature--> I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. [This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 04-14-2000).] |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Welcome to Passions!  Very Good Post. When you see something you want, go for it. don't wait the chance will pass you by and you won't get another. Welcome again The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Great first post isiskate,your words conveyed to me the sense of frustration and the fear of failure that`s so devastating when it`s someone we care about.I enjoyed your poem, thanks for sharing. |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Very nice first post! Welcome to Passions, I'm sure you'll enjoy it here, I'm addicted! Once again, good job! sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome my namesake!!  What a wonderful name you chose Indeed this was moving, wonderful first post. *Namaste* A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
I'd welcome you as well though I'm sort of a new commer myself. It is however a great piece. It's taken me a long time to get over that wall I too had built,but you'll find love can be so great if you only presue it. Don't be afraid to hurt. It builds character and it would be hard for someone not to love you back! HelenaJ |
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isiskate81 Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
Hi everyone!!! Thanks for your post. I hope you enjoyed my poem. It was writen for a guy I'm freinds with and I have had a crush on him since i was in Pre-K Im a in 12th grade this year and i wrote it b/c I know I'll never have him. But its ok B/C we will always be friend. But I still with we would love me more than a friend. Well, thanks for you posts. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to Dark Passions isiskate. . . This is a wonderful poem. . . I can relate to those "moments" where we don't know what to say, and then it's gone. . . and we wish that we could have them back again. . . Excellent.. . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
all you are i see all i am will be your love with me i hold you dear stay close to me my heart is yours my love your hands all yours my love in every story told im here to hold and yet in blue the moon is true and lilies blossum all tonight because of my love to you and yet you see it not Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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