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lifeispain
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since 2000-04-17
Posts 1


0 posted 2000-04-17 04:54 AM


destroyed.
stripped bare by three words.
i've anticipated this for all of time.
i acted this out countless times before.
the way we sit here.
marionettes.
slumped over in our erotic embrace.
the sweat from your heaving chest clings to me like a mother to her child.
the rot in your teeth.
the way it brought me crashing down.
the times it woke me up at 3am and smacked me in the face.
mesmerizing eyes.
they dance around me like a candle flame.
look through me and into my guts.
this cancer inside had no choice.
it will survive through the end.
my whole world smells like cunt.
my whole world fell apart.
my whole world will never survive this.
this filth i wear like a badge of honor.
please leave the light on for me.
i will finally drag myself home.
if i can recall the way.
are you lost?
yes.



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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-17 11:26 AM


Welcome to Dark Passions, I have felt much of what you say, and what you expressed, and what you didn't say.
All seems from the heart, and felt.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-04-17 03:11 PM


you found your way here.  you can't be too lost.  what a first piece. wow.

*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.



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