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NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-04-16 04:54 PM


Need

What you need is what you need
but look before you leap
sometimes when you make the jump
you lose things you wanted to keep

NamelessOne

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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-16 05:00 PM


Like into Love.
And Like keeping your sanity.
short, good.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Broken Wings
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since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-04-16 05:59 PM


It does seem that way doesnt it....when we go out and grab what we need, somehow the things we want with us seem to slip from our grasp...maybe its because they really arent ours to keep. GREAT WORK  

take care
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT



HelenaJ
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since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
3 posted 2000-04-16 06:18 PM


That's great. Definately a lesson I've learned the hard way! I suppose we all have to look a little closer at the word and it's true meaning.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-04-16 06:29 PM


Short and so true.  You should ALWAYS think before you leap too.  Have to be willing to risk losing what is there in front of you.  Tough chance to take.  Great work!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
5 posted 2000-04-17 03:14 PM


learn to travel light!!!!!!! hahahaha!!!!!!
extremely powerful.  you have such a way w/ our language...  are you feeling froggy?

*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.



dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

6 posted 2000-04-17 04:05 PM


Concise and to the point.  Think before rushing into things..something we all should learn.
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