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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
You may think of me as silly, and it’s a little thing to most I keep the glass you drank from the last time you were here the last time we had a toast. I don’t clean it not in the least you see it has this lip print on the rim that does soothe this beast. I bring it out on special occasions that’s every night to me, I gently place ice in the bottom then pour our favorite wine carefully. Holding it up to the light to gaze upon your lip print so sensuous, and full my eyes brim then water, becoming a pool. I place my lips next to where yours had been inhaling the fragrance of your essence and sipping the wine, so slowly you’d think it a sin. Lighting a candle and listing to a favorite song, I rock my body with an unseen partner, where my white dove had been, now gone. carefully placing it far to the back not to be misused I’ll bring it out again when I feel my heart to be abused. Thinking of you softly not believing you have flown still holding my heart in hand for you to come home. Joel And again for my (White Dove) I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
What sadness my wolfen friend, i hope she comes to her senses and returns to your loving light, your words moved me for once again the heart felt emotion flows out of your writing into my heart like a river. thank you |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I hope your heart does flow well, I wait for her, and passions will take the longing I have for her. I just can't change the nature of this beast. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
You've done it again Joel. I was moved by this one. Power doesn't even begin to describe what this piece has. Wonderful Wonderful Work, I hope she does return. I am so glad you came to passions. Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
This piece is so very beautiful, Joel. Very hauntingly beautiful. Tears came to my eyes, because your poem reminded me of my lost love. Very well written, my friend. sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
This is so romantic and sad at the same time. I hope that she comes back to you but i also hope that you would be able to move on if she doesn't. take care *HUG* Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
Am I going to have to call this girl and tell her she's insane not to swoop lightly back to you? The levels of love you convey gives me faith in mens hearts. I don't think I have to tell you what else I thought about it. Thanks again! helena |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Sometimes when we write here in passions we can get carried away and push the truth, I just wanted you to know that when I talk about this love for my (white Dove ) it is true. To my very being. and thank you all for the warmth and understanding, we do travel the same paths and intertwine with all our hearts. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a dove always receives and carries a message especially of love. Perhaps that can give you some hope now when you need it...this was beautiful Kathleen |
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Dark Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18Oviedo, FL, USA |
I am left speechless... Wow... it is powerful and gracful...and VERY moving. "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
NamelessOne: your heart is a lighted river. dhuron: (Daniel) thank you my friend. sKiTtLes: I would not have you cry, but to cleanse your pain. I know this all to well. Broken Wings: Romantic,(yes). Sad,(yes). Move on, (what's that?) I hope also. HelenaJ: would you like her # to call?. haha. Irish Rose: yes some hope is what I need. thank you. Dark Usagi: To leave a Poet speechless, is beyond imagination. But thank you. and thank you all. For putting up with the mutterings of an old man. hahaha Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh yes Joel, Very sad indeed my friend, I shed a tear for this one. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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