Dark Poetry #1 |
selfless |
HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
I feel the things others won't I feel the things others cannot bare An outlet of emotions Keeper of the key Master of the house Long to tell them of the burden I carry for them The secrets I craddle and hold for them Quiet All for them Who will carry me? The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere. Mute. Made dumb by my own thoughts. Tonguetied and awkward. Tripping over my own voice. A pen and paper for my voice. HelenaJ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Helena, this rung to close to home for me, like you, I help all I can, but secretly worry when my time comes who will be there for me. Really there I mean? But for Karma's sake I give my all to those who need me, and hope that at least a few are there when I need them. In the past I have needed someone and no one was interested, the lesson I learned? Choose friends more carefully. Thanks for posting this, I really appreciate knowing I am not alone in this thinking. A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
I too know how it feels to be the stone that everyone stands on...and i agree with Isis that we should chose the people that are going to be around us more carefully...but i have also learned that there arent too many people that can handle what we bare. Thank you for sharing. *HUG* take care Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
ah us honorable co-dependents. we always come thru, don't we. and if we should finally realize what the hell we are doing, then it's only pain watching what they swear we have done to them. what a cycle. i can't carry you, but i'll walk beside you. *****kynder quote: |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
And i`ll hold your hand as well HelenaJ your poetry speaks from the heart, i enjoyed this one |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
My back is broad, I lift hundreds of pounds a day, and thousands of lb.. a week. You can jump on kid and I mean that. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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kittyj Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32CANADA |
It is not very often that you read something that can hit home directly. When someone else's words make things clearer for yourself. Thanks for giving me a better understanding, and letting me know that I'm not the only one trying to save everyone I know. |
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