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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp

0 posted 2000-04-16 04:52 PM



Aged Love.

When age has come upon me will I still love you?
When I take out my teeth at night?
When I can’t reach the bathroom in time?
When I can’t see who is at the door?
When I don’t know how to tie my shoes?
When I no longer know my name?
When I get lost in the hallway?
When I can no longer feed myself?
When I can’t  dress myself?
When I can’t?
When I can’t?
When I can’t
When I can’t find the words to express my love to you?
And can only stare.
yes.


Joel.


 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

© Copyright 2000 Joel. - All Rights Reserved
NamelessOne
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
1 posted 2000-04-16 04:59 PM


Joel ,i believe true love never dies or grows too old
interesting subject ,well written
i enjoyed it thanks

Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-04-16 06:16 PM


This is lovely...a love so pure as this is hard to find. Thank You for sharing.  


take care
Broken wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT



Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2000-04-16 06:26 PM


Joel,
True love knows no bounds.....time, space, age, etc.  No need to worry, my friend.  Those words will always come.  Nice writing!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
4 posted 2000-04-16 06:26 PM


This subject has no boundaries including age.
Probably the only thing that is beautiful about the aging process. I love seeing an elderly couple holding hands. It fills me with hope. Again you have touched me. Your muse must be a wonderful woman!
helena

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