Dark Poetry #1 |
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Aged Love |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Aged Love. When age has come upon me will I still love you? When I take out my teeth at night? When I can’t reach the bathroom in time? When I can’t see who is at the door? When I don’t know how to tie my shoes? When I no longer know my name? When I get lost in the hallway? When I can no longer feed myself? When I can’t dress myself? When I can’t? When I can’t? When I can’t When I can’t find the words to express my love to you? And can only stare. yes. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Joel ,i believe true love never dies or grows too old interesting subject ,well written i enjoyed it thanks |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
This is lovely...a love so pure as this is hard to find. Thank You for sharing. ![]() take care Broken wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Joel, True love knows no bounds.....time, space, age, etc. No need to worry, my friend. Those words will always come. Nice writing!! ![]() Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
This subject has no boundaries including age. Probably the only thing that is beautiful about the aging process. I love seeing an elderly couple holding hands. It fills me with hope. Again you have touched me. Your muse must be a wonderful woman! helena |
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