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Jaded Stars Are Beautiful Too
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Jaded Stars Are Beautiful Too |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Jaded stars can be beautiful too Pathetically drowning in an shallow puddle Killing my fire once provided by you A soul that can drain surpisingly suddle Its amazing how you dont need what you want But how you die when what you want is what you need And you relize to late but soon enough to enjoy the taunt Life is great when your concious enough to watch Life bleed Living only for the beauty of the moment, I could die I was a big flamming accident you regret having created I lost myself in a better place found in your eyes A place bright and shinny but gold plated Its not so much that you are gone.... Its the fact that we are missing.... |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
"Its amazing how you dont need what you want But how you die when what you want is what you need" ____________________________________________ Its not so much that you are gone.... Its the fact that we are missing.... Emperor...this was very insightful... i liked it a lot...honest... great work! If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Thank you very much Avanti, I those are my 2 favorite parts of the poem as well, the last 2 lines, basically summed up what I was trying to say, I am glad that they were as impressive as I hoped. Thank You, Your friend Ember |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God how I feel these words. "Its not so much that you are gone.... Its the fact that we are missing.... This is so true. love it kid. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Wow the last two lines so insightful and crystal clear...i loved the whole poem but the last lines are awesome Thanks for sharing this with us. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Ember....how could you ever think that you couldn't write? Once again excellent poem. I liked the whole thing...but especially the last two lines. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wonder Post, the last two lines were the best part! |
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