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Heart Thaw
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Heart Thaw Like rays of the sun melt away the winter the light of your beauty warms the core of my soul and away runs the pain in rivulets it flows transformed from the mantle that held frozen my heart... |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This is so true, I had locked down, and deep frozen my heart, and with one kiss, it had thawed. Love this little piece. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Great post. This one's really nice, being light and pretty. sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
my favorite line... "transformed from the mantle that held frozen my heart" so beautiful Kathleen |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
It was the title that drew me in, and I am very glad that I read your poem. Oh Wow, Nameless one, now this is so powerful. I relate completely. I wonder did you write this for me? Your poem is short, to the point and perfect, sometimes less really is more! *The last two lines are absolutely beautiful. I look forward to more poems by you!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
and i can hear your sigh of relief... i can see your shoulders lift just a little... so happy for my friend!!!!! BEAUTIFUL WORK!!!!!!!!!! *****kynder quote: |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
thank you for your replies Thanks Joel ,sKITtLeS,Irish Rose for your kind words. Hello Melissa and thank you and my friend Kynder you make me smile ,thank you |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
The Title lured me here. wonderful piece, it is much needed right now. The feelings and emotions within. wonderful Nameless Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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