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kynder
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since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-04-15 11:31 PM



My mind travels to the valleys in your eyes,
The mountains of your thighs.
And when we shared the same air,
It tasted sweeter.
Your breath- I can still smell,
Lingering in and caressing my hair.
For one moment in time,
I held you as though you were mine.
Now I have the rest of my life to wonder
If we got on the wrong ride.
Took us straight to the end.
To speak to me appears forbidden.

Blame it on my gypsy blood,
Curiousity,
Succumbing to lustful sin-
All I know is we had just started to begin.
Hoping for a leisurely pace of
Learning your workings within.
Thought my eyes were so very wise,
I'd see past all the hype and the
Lies.
Just goes to show with all the years
And all the lessons they bring,
Still no different does the lovebird
Sing.


*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.



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Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-16 02:20 AM


When we hold them as if they are ours, it is hard to say good bye, before it seems to get started.
Loved the way it was expressed.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

NamelessOne
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
2 posted 2000-04-16 02:34 AM


Kynder my friend,
   So i think what you`re saying is that even though our mind knows a certain love interest isn`t right for us our heart and in a big way our libido think differently ,of course maybe its the 20 hour day i`m running on has my head kinda skewed but i think i`m close.Either way it`s some seriously good writing ,i`m becoming a big fan...you rock

check yur email

namelessone
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tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-04-17 06:56 AM


Kynder~
You have amazed me again, this is so good.
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


kittyj
Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32
CANADA
4 posted 2000-04-17 05:49 PM


Wow.  The ride always goes by so fast.  I will try to remember that, because I always seem to forget, until it is too late.
Radness.

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