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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
A tidalwave of thoghts and memories crash against the shores of my mind Salt water tears from my oceans soul Loud and moving Waters never still Waves of moods protect and hide the undiscovered secrets beneath Visit and admire from affar Do not wade in my waters It's storms will only pull you down To the lonely fathoms below The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere. Mute. Made dumb by my own thoughts. Tonguetied and awkward. Tripping over my own voice. A pen and paper for my voice. HelenaJ |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
To fathom these depths, would be any mans dream, to find a beauty as you, I'd don a snorkel, dance in flippers, and swim the coral reefs of adventure. This is a beautiful way of saying to anyone that you are more, and if they don't know it they don't need it, and don't approach me without a truth in your heart. love it kid. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Oh Yes where did i put those flippers... excellent visuals and words from a deep soul i liked this one very much |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wonderful, I love how you used the ocean and water to convey everything. I'm such a nut for the ocean. Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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kittyj Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32CANADA |
Girl, you where did you learn how to paint a picture with words? I am still drowning in the visuals. Anyone lucky enough to wade in your waters could never be lonely, don't ever forget that. kittyj |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
once again she speaks for me. thank you for letting it known that they don't dare go in these depths unknown. i feel ya girl. *****kynder quote: |
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