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xEmperorEmber
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since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

0 posted 2000-04-15 04:34 PM

When I can see the moment of truth
In all of your lies
This is when I love you from the root
This is when I could die

Even as you walk out the door
I feel the tugging of my soul
I must watch you leave and say no more
without you all I feel can feel is a hole

Its my fault now watch me smile
when all I am is broken
thats when I hit Denial
Then all we have is stolen

My eyes went from blue to blind
The moment you turned away
Gave it up and left it all behind
The World went dark that day

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-04-15 05:18 PM

We do live in Denial to the one's we love, turning a deaf ear to our own truth.
Very expressive, and good.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

xEmperorEmber
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

2 posted 2000-04-15 05:24 PM

Thank you Joel,

I am obviously new at posting and it means alot to me to have feed back. It is after all what helps us grow. Very Much Appreciated.

Your friend,

Ember

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-04-15 06:18 PM

Welcome to passions hon, love your nickname, quite entriguing there!! Denial is a friend to jealousy in my opinion and we must bear him too at times... Great work

A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

xEmperorEmber
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

4 posted 2000-04-15 06:39 PM

Thank you very much Isis, good contrast as well, your reply is very much appreciated,

Your friend Ember

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2000-04-15 10:19 PM

Well, Ember, I must say you are glowing bright with this one. This one strikes some deep emotion. Excellent work.

Michael

JD
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 61
N Prov

6 posted 2000-04-15 11:54 PM

I enjoyed this poem.Keep up the good work.

Everything Dies

xEmperorEmber
Member

since 2000-03-28

Posts 136
tx

7 posted 2000-04-16 12:26 PM

Thank you JD and Micheal, these replies really mean alot for me. I am new to this and its nice to feel such strong support while expressing my emotions.

Thanks both of ya,

your friend
Ember

NamelessOne
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 197
Biloxi MS

8 posted 2000-04-16 04:40 AM

Hello Ember,
I must say that your poem so well describes a dark period in my life that it`s scary and my heart goes out to you for having experienced it also.Excellent work,i look forward to more from you.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

9 posted 2000-04-16 12:22 PM

Hey Ember,
   The last person you expected to hear from right? Probably. But anywayz, this poem was wonderful...full of emotion and depth. You know...she's just as blind as you are...

                Yours truly,
                   Angel

"The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~

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