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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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The Day the World Went Dark |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
When I can see the moment of truth In all of your lies This is when I love you from the root This is when I could die Even as you walk out the door I feel the tugging of my soul I must watch you leave and say no more without you all I feel can feel is a hole Its my fault now watch me smile when all I am is broken thats when I hit Denial Then all we have is stolen My eyes went from blue to blind The moment you turned away Gave it up and left it all behind The World went dark that day |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
We do live in Denial to the one's we love, turning a deaf ear to our own truth. Very expressive, and good. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Thank you Joel, I am obviously new at posting and it means alot to me to have feed back. It is after all what helps us grow. Very Much Appreciated. Your friend, Ember |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to passions hon, love your nickname, quite entriguing there!! Denial is a friend to jealousy in my opinion and we must bear him too at times... Great work  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Thank you very much Isis, good contrast as well, your reply is very much appreciated, Your friend Ember |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, Ember, I must say you are glowing bright with this one. This one strikes some deep emotion. Excellent work. Michael |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
I enjoyed this poem.Keep up the good work.   Everything Dies |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Thank you JD and Micheal, these replies really mean alot for me. I am new to this and its nice to feel such strong support while expressing my emotions. Thanks both of ya, your friend Ember |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Hello Ember, I must say that your poem so well describes a dark period in my life that it`s scary and my heart goes out to you for having experienced it also.Excellent work,i look forward to more from you. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Hey Ember, The last person you expected to hear from right? Probably. But anywayz, this poem was wonderful...full of emotion and depth. You know...she's just as blind as you are... Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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