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HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada

0 posted 2000-04-17 09:50 PM


I've become weak
in this emotion
Dizzy in it's spin
Disoriented
Lost
I hold nothing of that I did
before
this
Miss the strength I had
before
this
Never understood the word
before
this


He wasn't very nice!


 The words that come to me here fail me elsewhere.
Mute.
Made dumb by my own thoughts.
Tonguetied and awkward.
Tripping over my own voice.
A pen and paper for my voice.

HelenaJ

© Copyright 2000 Jenn - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-17 11:24 PM


I feel for you kid.
know that we are not all like that.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-04-18 07:32 AM


*HUG* i'm sorry you were left feeling this way, in time you will see it was for the best.

take care
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


kittyj
Junior Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 32
CANADA
3 posted 2000-04-18 08:46 AM


You are so amazing with getting the whole vision in my head.  Pictures and sounds, all from properly placed words.  I will have to ask you more about this one.


Dark Usagi
Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 18
Oviedo, FL, USA
4 posted 2000-04-18 09:11 AM


I know this feeling...well at least one like it, it is impossible to know that you feel the exact same feeling. I am sorry this person was such a jerk to you but you will make it and it will make you a stornger person in the end...

 "Pictures are so perfect...in a perfect moment until you look into their eyes and truley see the storms of their soul"-Dark Usagi

Shandelier
Junior Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 22
Canada
5 posted 2000-04-18 10:58 AM


You speak so clearly in so few words.  I'm sorry you were so mistreated, but it'll get better.  

Shandelier

HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
6 posted 2000-04-18 11:26 AM


Thanks all. Not to worry. Got rid of him pretty fast. And healed even faster.
Kit;
Mr k.p from b.c if that helps any.

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