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I Hurt Inside
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I Hurt Inside |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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My soul it cries out, It echoes through my consciousness, 'I hurt inside!' 'I hurt inside!' It's asking for my help, Help to ease this burden of pain, I try to shelter it, Not let it feel this way again. In an accusatory voice it says, 'It's your fault!' But it's not talking to me, It talks to another you see. The echoes resound down the corridors, 'I hurt inside!', 'I hurt inside!'. Reverberating off the walls, Nothing can drown these calls. 'I hurt inside, I hurt inside!'. What did you do to deserve these wounds to your pride, Is there no where we can hide? Please stop this hurt inside. Echoes round and round, Blurring over the top of one another, 'I hurt inside!', 'This time I won't take it in my stride!'... A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Isis, Are you stuck inside all that hurt like a prison? Hope you can break down the walls soon and get happy inside.  Smiles much needed here. Joy |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
When the thorn hurts your foot pluck it out. Love you kid. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Break down those walls Isis!!! This is a wonderful poem, as always my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
"This time i won`t take it in my stride!" Thats right girl FIGHT !!! i liked the poem and the declaration at the end...great stuff |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
thank the good Lord the hurt doesn't take away the survival in you. i'm rootin for ya!!! *****kynder quote: |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Wonderful poem, Isis! I felt every word of it. The heart tells us it's hurting, but it also tells us to get stronger, my friend. sKiTtLeS~ "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." -the words of a friend |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I didn't get the point across well enough. There is a song where the girl cries out over and over 'I hurt inside!'. That is what I was trying to portray.. Joel my howling friend love you too Buddy or should I say Dad???? Thanks everyone?? A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I think you got your point across perfectly my sweet...i heard it echoing off the walls...of your heart... very well writen Isis. take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks so much Janet Marie!! I am so glad someone got it as it was intended!! Miss you girl!! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You hurt inside - I hurt all over - go figure? Just kidding there, Isis. As usual, I can relate only too well to the emotion behind your poetry. Well done. Michael |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks my Leige!!  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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