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Night Music |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Night Music The night was meant for music like the sun was meant to shine carried on the quiet air it draws us near and eases our troubles by the act of stopping time Wrapped up in the melody that has become a living thing we`re bound by a deeper need to be moved,our spirit away and drifting High up,pushed aloft we smile like children accepting the world and not doubting the joy as real we take in the strains of the music because what makes it work is that it makes us feel Alive with a sense of thereness caught astride life`s wonderous mare and all the way is never far enough when for the rush we`re caught unprepared As the notes cascade and the rythym calls sweet harmony beckons with its rise and fall The music of the night and of life and of love thrills us to the marrow and we`re thrust above cut loose from what had us tethered be it something or ourselves and for a little while we`re free. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God kid you almost got a tear from me, not from the sad melody, but from the depth in the beauty of it all, God I love this. Please keep posting. Joel. PS I don't print many this I will. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
wonderfully moving! I think that is all I have to say. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Thank you guys so much for your replies ...hehe you make my day. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
this is one of your best simply becuz your slant has changed slightly here. do i see a small sparkle or new light in those eyes!!??? makes my day to read sweet happy words from you!!! *****kynder quote: |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow....deeeeep!! Very nice writing. I love the subject and content. Great job!!!!  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
I enjoyed this poem.Keep up the good work.   |
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