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NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-04-15 02:47 AM


Night Music

The night was meant for music
like the sun was meant to shine
carried on the quiet air it draws us near
and eases our troubles
by the act of stopping time

Wrapped up in the melody
that has become a living thing
we`re bound by a deeper need
to be moved,our spirit away and drifting

High up,pushed aloft we smile
like children accepting the world
and not doubting the joy as real
we take in the strains of the music
because what makes it work is that it makes us feel

Alive with a sense of thereness
caught astride life`s wonderous mare
and all the way is never far enough
when for the rush we`re caught unprepared

As the notes cascade and the rythym calls
sweet harmony beckons with its rise and fall

The music of the night and of life and of love
thrills us to the marrow and we`re thrust above
cut loose from what had us tethered
be it something or ourselves
and for a little while we`re free.

© Copyright 2000 NamelessOne - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-04-15 09:26 AM


God kid you almost got a tear from me, not from the sad melody, but from the depth in the beauty of it all, God I love this.
Please keep posting.
Joel.  PS I don't print many this I will.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
2 posted 2000-04-15 11:54 AM


wonderfully moving! I think that is all I have to say.

NamelessOne
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197
Biloxi MS
3 posted 2000-04-15 02:51 PM


Thank you guys so much for your replies ...hehe you make my day.
kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
4 posted 2000-04-15 11:16 PM


this is one of your best simply becuz your slant has changed slightly here.  do i see a small sparkle or new light in those eyes!!???  makes my day to read sweet happy words from you!!!
*****kynder


 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.



Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-04-15 11:46 PM


Wow....deeeeep!!  Very nice writing.  I love the subject and content.  Great job!!!!  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

JD
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61
N Prov
6 posted 2000-04-15 11:53 PM


I enjoyed this poem.Keep up the good work.





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