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Dark Poetry #1

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kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

0 posted 2000-04-14 01:55 PM

I wish my thoughts could be yours.
Even for one hour.
Then you would find
You are the most rare and unique,
Precious and sweet
In my mind's garden of flowers.
But those stifling weeds,
Doubt and Distrust,
Grow and choke you out.
Full bloom never quite comes about.

*****kynder

quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.

NamelessOne
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 197
Biloxi MS

1 posted 2000-04-14 03:57 PM

Powerful and it conveys your message so clearly .Time for some weed killer...love and trust ,too bad it`s not in the lawn and garden section at walmart. I`d be all over it

Thanks for sharing this, i found it awesome.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-04-14 06:44 PM

Powerful, beautiful work here, yet said so simply with so few words. Excellent

A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

3 posted 2000-04-14 08:49 PM

I had wished the same.
love it.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

AVANTI
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE

4 posted 2000-04-15 01:42 AM

very powerful words ..and great work...
see ya around

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-06-23 02:41 AM

As always Kynder great work. Love JJ

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-06-29 07:19 AM

I enjoyed the beautiful thoughts...James

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