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Joel the wolf
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0 posted 2000-04-13 09:42 AM



Once called mine

You said you loved me, then gave me a sweet kiss,
I had taken you at your word,  my sweetheart of bliss,

I opened up my chambered heart, I had locked away.
No thief in the night could have taken it they would have paid

I had built it up to withstand  hammering blows.
You tipped your head, opening your baby blue eyes. Oh God only knows!

I peak out to see who was there with a start
like a beautiful sunset you opened and entered my heart.

Our love was passionate and wild, like drinking water dyeing of thirst
I had found love wrapped up within you, looking back now knowing I was cursed.

I thought I had made sure that my heart was secured
no lock smith in the land could ever endured,
the combinations to free my heart

My soul did surround it with an invisible shield,
no cupids arrow would it ever have yield.

You opened it up, not with the fear of asunder,
But slow and powerful,  like distant thunder.

This wolf tried to chew off it’s own leg, to this heart-hurt snare,
you took the opportunity and didn’t play fare.

I had no choice the nature of this beast
is to love with my all, not fearing in the least.

We had soul mating gut wrenching kisses, a love so deep within.
What happened did love find a sin?

How could it have gone so trebly wrong,  in so short a time,
you were my heart song. you were mine.

Finding this old pain in side is unbearable,  I dare not say.
This pain I can’t endure any longer I can not stay.

When all I could think of, was you as mine.
You started to run, and I couldn’t see
I’m looking at the sun, and the brilliance did blind me.

Now I’ve been dragged down this brier patch one more time.
By  this White Dove,    I once called mine.
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 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

[This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 04-13-2000).]

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sKiTtLeS
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since 2000-04-12
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1 posted 2000-04-13 09:54 AM


Joel, this post brought tears to my eyes.
I'm experiencing these feelings of loss at this point in my life, and I love reading other people's expressions of the same subject.
Job well, well done!

sKiTtLeS~

SEA
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2 posted 2000-04-13 12:42 PM


Joel~ it seems to me you are still very much in love with your white dove. I think you should try to get her back.....-SEA
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
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3 posted 2000-04-13 05:09 PM


sKiTtLeS: Ahh. the river of tears, seem forever.

Sea you I rely on to be boundless.
If it were that simple. But thank you.
My next post will ?? show my answer to this.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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