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~Venus~
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 128

0 posted 2000-02-17 07:26 PM

I look around
and prepare for battle
I ready myself
taking my dagger out
The enemies all around me
Attacking
I lose myself
In battle
Forgetting
Who I am
and killing
The enemies
Then I wake up
and return to reality

Or not?

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

*She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd*

ill_tactics
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 149

1 posted 2000-02-17 07:38 PM

NOT...the reality is only what you think it is. You could be in it right now, but are you really real...confusing isnt it. Well, I like this piece. Hope to read more of your work. Much love, One love, PEACE

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-02-17 08:09 PM

One reality out of a dozen possibilities perhaps? Good work I enjoyed this one

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

3 posted 2000-02-17 11:29 PM

like it. it reminded me of the matrix. (a must see movie for any "what is reality?" buff) good ending.
jannel

"I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"

TanAngel
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

4 posted 2000-02-18 10:28 PM

I understand completly! I feel like that WAY TOO MUCH! Maybe we can both get over that feeling of not knowing what is going on and what reality is...

"Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-02-22 03:40 PM

So your dreams and reality are the same?
I hope you find some rest. I really enjoyed reading this. James

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

6 posted 2000-04-12 10:04 PM

I really liked this one, who knows if it was reality or a dream...

I agree with Jannel, reminds me of the Matrix....

The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

7 posted 2000-04-13 05:15 PM

I don't care if it is this reality, or not I just want the enemies to kill, something I can latch on to.
Joel.

I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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