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SEA
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0 posted 2000-04-12 01:45 PM



You wouldn't believe
the Mom I've got,
skipping by I ask
What's cookin' in the pot?

Smiling she says,
Why, it's Bumble Bee Stew
I'm making it special
my girl, just for you

Are you crazy Mom?!
Or just going mad
Bumble Bee Stew
I surely have never had

My silly girl
It's a witch's brew
every young witch
loves Bumble Bee Stew

Well how do you make it?
Can you tell me that?
And if I'm a young witch
dear Mom, where ever is my hat?

A young witch
does not wear a hat
my child did you forget
your little black cat?

I have a black cat
yes, this is true
but Mom, how do you make
Bumble Bee Stew?

It's a secret
one day I'll share with you,
and together we'll make
Bumble Bee Stew.
-SEA-

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AVANTI
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1 posted 2000-04-12 02:08 PM


intresting thme...very well written...
rhyming..and simple but sweet..


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

kynder
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2 posted 2000-04-12 02:58 PM


this is precious.  makes me want to show it to my mom!!!!!!! brings smiles!!!  good for you!!!
  kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.


SEA
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3 posted 2000-04-12 03:04 PM


Avanti~ thanks...

Kynder~ My daughter inspired this, we were writting together yesterday and she said something about Mom and got....I was in the kitchen and didn't catch all she said but this poem started brewing so fast I had to write it down! Makes me think of my Mom too... -SEA

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4 posted 2000-04-12 05:34 PM


This was cute!  I liked the rhyming beat that it followed!  Great Job!  

<3 shadow


 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

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5 posted 2000-04-12 07:42 PM


ShadowHeart~ thanks! I had fun with this. -SEA
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6 posted 2000-04-12 07:51 PM


This was fun to read SEA!!

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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7 posted 2000-04-12 09:25 PM


Me too.
I danced with the tempo.
A lighter heart, is good.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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8 posted 2000-04-12 09:55 PM


Dhuron~ I'm glad it was! thank you!

Joel~ thanks!
-SEA

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