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A Slow Burn
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A Slow Burn |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida 
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And finally, I've come to learn That loneliness loses its burn After weeks and months of Nowhere to turn. I could scream and sob, Rant and rave, Even beg and plead for Someone to fill this need. Deaf ears, it would seem, fills The earth surrounding me. It's as if I shall live out The rest of my years with Eyes sparkling- Not from diamonds of desire and Love Divine- Rays reflect from the River of tears that Never runs dry. *****kynder "God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars." - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kynder~ Hi! This is a fantastic poem! Love it.  -SEA |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Kynder, I think there are a few men here with an honest passion, for life and what should be natural and honest in love, I’ve read so many beautiful things ( and this is one of them) from so lonely and passionate people here, Please don’t turn your back on all men kind. Your right about the river of tears, but it does slow down. And it takes a certain amount of water to produce a rainbow. Love your spirit kid, I do. Joel [This message has been edited by Joel the wolf (edited 04-11-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Is everyone crying over their poetry or is it just me How honest and refreshing.... a slow burn..such a perfect title. I loved it. Kathleen |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Kynder, This is a wonderful poem. Yes loneliness sucks, but in time someone will come along and that feeling will melt away...Be Strong and Keep Hope. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
"...and in lonliness one may find the true self..."(C)alibaster Wonderful words are formed from your lonliness... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I apologies for my spelling error of "loneliness" above....... There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i really appreciate everyone's comments & jewels of hope. i feel i have discovered a river of renewal here. everything in the dark soon comes to the light. there is an end to my tunnel. i can see it now. i don't know any of you, but i'm feeling crazy love!!!!!! just what this chick needed!!!!!!!!! quote: |
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