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NamelessOne
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since 2000-04-09
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Biloxi MS

0 posted 2000-04-11 07:56 AM


Yin and Yang

Pen to paper
Needle to vein
Blood flows into words
Helping to keep me sane
cauterizing meter
Rehabilitating rhyme
Boosting the process
carried on by time
Pain is to the poet
What wind is to the sail
loves does to the writer
What the hammer does the nail
Emotions released through words and phrases
Helps to rid the ghosts it raises
Deeper to wider
as pain to knowledge
the depth of suffering
and the breadth of understanding
are the yin and yang of my emotional universe


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2000-04-11 08:06 AM


Loved this one.  James
tracie66
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2 posted 2000-04-11 09:45 AM


Well done, written so well.
I liked it very much
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-04-11 11:30 AM


Superb.  I really loved this one!     
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2000-04-11 12:44 PM


Spoke directly to my heart...beautiful!
kynder
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since 2000-04-11
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Tallahassee, Florida
5 posted 2000-04-11 02:35 PM


man. what words are there left for me to use to describe your own?  ah, the dilemma.  do you use your talent, God given phrases in your head,only to feel emotions swell from what you swear hell.  good for you for knowing it is the balance of life that brings it in view.  God bless.  Always remember, He will carry it for you if you let Him.  
Joel the wolf
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6 posted 2000-04-12 12:08 PM


We do put our blood to pen, don't we.
this is a 5 howler.
Joel.

NamelessOne
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Biloxi MS
7 posted 2000-04-12 02:09 AM


thank you all for the kind words  
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8 posted 2000-04-12 01:21 PM


NamelessOne~ WOW!!! THIS IS EXCELLENT!!-SEA
ShadowHeart
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since 2000-03-25
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9 posted 2000-04-12 05:37 PM


Great Job!  I really liked this because of all the truth in the words.

shadow


 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
10 posted 2000-04-12 07:20 PM


Wonderful work, different perceptions I love that!!  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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