Dark Poetry #1 |
Yin and Yang |
NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Yin and Yang Pen to paper Needle to vein Blood flows into words Helping to keep me sane cauterizing meter Rehabilitating rhyme Boosting the process carried on by time Pain is to the poet What wind is to the sail loves does to the writer What the hammer does the nail Emotions released through words and phrases Helps to rid the ghosts it raises Deeper to wider as pain to knowledge the depth of suffering and the breadth of understanding are the yin and yang of my emotional universe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Loved this one. James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well done, written so well. I liked it very much Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Superb. I really loved this one! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Spoke directly to my heart...beautiful! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
man. what words are there left for me to use to describe your own? ah, the dilemma. do you use your talent, God given phrases in your head,only to feel emotions swell from what you swear hell. good for you for knowing it is the balance of life that brings it in view. God bless. Always remember, He will carry it for you if you let Him. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
We do put our blood to pen, don't we. this is a 5 howler. Joel. |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
thank you all for the kind words |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
NamelessOne~ WOW!!! THIS IS EXCELLENT!!-SEA |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
Great Job! I really liked this because of all the truth in the words. shadow Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful work, different perceptions I love that!! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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