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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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I had my heart broken before, It felt like i was dead for a moment, I did the same thing to someone, Now they feel like they are dead for a moment, The pain is to stop if I must continue to achieve what I have set out forth to do, One must learn from history, not repeat history thyself, I feel the arms of the devil on me, Where is the heaven that was promised to me? Where are the virtues that are suppose to teach me about goodness? Is harming others, not harming thyself? Is being harmed by others not harming thyself? To this what do you say, but sit there and stare in the blankness, I do this to all for they all have done this to me, The cycle does not end, until one of us end, Which one shall it be? Shall it be you or I? Who is to say this?, but u say it anyway Tearing the heart from it's rightful place and throwing it in the pits of hell, Who gave us this right? One demands all, but in return one wants more, Acheiving perfection is set on one's mind, but who sets the limit to what one thinks? A broken promise is what is not to have happened in the first place, if one must continue to exist in perfect harmony with nature, A broken heart is the end of all as we know it, from there one can only go downards in life, Hope has tried it's last trick to bring you back, but u deny it The cycle continues till there is no more goodness left in us, even then one does not change it's way and continues to what pleases the mind, Filling the desires on someone else's time, To that I laugh, laugh to the dispecable beings we are The end will come, only to began this cycle once more, So shall I come back, to write about it once again. [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 04-10-2000).] |
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Caitlin Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 15 |
A poem I can relate to all too well these days...we hafta remember to never lose hope in these times, though. Some days may seem darker than others, but there's always a silver lining to those rain clouds. Hang in there  |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
ah life paradoxs and all just remember to watch closely or you miss all the jokes Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
A very thought provoking Post...good job |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I almost let this one slip by? I’m glad I didn’t We do repeat what is familiar to us don’t we. So come back and write about it once again. Joel |
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