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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
I thought this would only be a couple pages of my life A chapter at most surely, but not a whole novel Yet it has become a tragedy, yet to come to a conclusion Page after page I turn looking for a change Chapter after chapter I wonder why there is no new plot I used to think life was interesting Things seemed to go my way sometimes Alas, what I want is unattainable, out of reach Page after page I realize that I cannot ever have what I wish for Now this book has become heavy, and awkward to carry With each page more brittle than the last, I find it hard not to tear As I read on the ink seems smeared and words hard to read I know not why I keep trying to find a mean The book is dull … no adventure, no risk Yet for some reason I still believe that this will change So page after page I turn looking for a change Hoping for a plot to follow A life to love There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I have 32 years of a story without theme under my belt... If you ever figure out how to develop a plot let me know would ya? great poem. michael |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
IN time the plot will change. At least that is what I keep believing for my story. All things come to those who wait The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I had a plot once!! Got drunk and forgot it. This almost brings it back. Thanks. Joel. Just gota roll with the blows kid. |
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Caitlin Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 15 |
Sometimes it is amazing how something you thought was so insignificant becomes such a big part of your life. That's what I hear in your words. Embrace life, good things will come  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Take a chance, don't follow the words anymore that you keep reading over and over. Write new words, begin new chapters, add excitment between the lines, and then hopefully, the end will be satisfying. Joy |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Wow I never expected this much response to my peom. If i ever do find a change I am sure you people will notice it in my poems. Thank you all for the input. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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