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Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

0 posted 2000-04-07 01:19 AM

Lost love with the setting Sun,
I have touched your wing in flight,
you soared to new highest my white dove,
an now you run.

Brushing your heart next to mine,
with promises of devotion and sweet surrender,
upon my brow frowns the lost of time,
with abandoned love rendered.

Oh the wantonness of it all in remembrance of your flight,
Angel like wings, a brief encounter of Elysian fields,
setting sun you were my hunger, my sight.

Tears will run, and rivers will flow
frigid waters I float upon thee,
finding little consoles in what I sow.

This river I drift upon, has been forever,
setting suns rendering it’s shadowy cast
false rainbows hearts of lovers severed.

My lungs struggling for precious air above,
this cup I hold forever within my bosom
fills to the brim over flows and will release in time,
I have set free my white dove.

Setting sun why has thou forsaken me,
Thine light had showed me the way
now the trail fades, the path is lost,
Mine eyes still tear with Thine brilliance,
and precious time at what cost.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-04-07 01:39 AM

Welcome Joel. what a lovely poem. Inspirational almost... And thankyou for the lovely comment you left on my poem, you already have a friend here - ME!!!
Thanks again and WELCOME!!!!!
Isis

There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

2 posted 2000-04-07 03:06 AM

Welcome to Passions!! Very nice poem also. Makes me think of such peace. Hope to see more of your work.

Peace,
Dark_kisses_Within

I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!

baerlon
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

3 posted 2000-04-07 03:09 AM

I enjoyed this alot, it goes along with the stlye i prefer to read and write. I thought it was very powerful at points. I hope to read more like it. < !signature-->

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

[This message has been edited by baerlon (edited 04-07-2000).]

blackhalo
Member

since 2000-02-15

Posts 467
Denver, CO

4 posted 2000-04-07 02:05 PM

Great poem....I have experienced losses. Great seeing you in the forums. Hope to see more of you.

Hope,
Alicia A. Renzelman

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2000-04-07 02:30 PM

A very eloquent description of pain and sorrow...and loss. Very poignant.

Kathleen

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2000-04-07 04:22 PM

Joel~ Welcome!! This is so full of love and longing. So much of your heart here.....that's what I felt......missing a piece of what makes you complete.-SEA

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

7 posted 2000-04-08 01:42 AM

Thank you Isis for the warm welcome.
Thank you Dark_kisses_Within , but I think the only peace I’ll get is when I transform.
And thank you baerlon, my style seems to be bouncing around.
Thank you Alicia, thank you for lessening & hearing.
Irish Rose what can I say? but again for not only your input, but your inspiration.
And to the Sea, you are boundless also. you also hit it on the nail head.

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