Dark Poetry #1 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the song of my heart plays today in a minor key an adagio filled with longing and sadness the sky is darker today without her light to guide me a flame helping me with my darkness my heart is broken and filled with this ache my night has been sleepless, tossing and turning this pain, my heart, is more than i can take my day is now filled with sorrow and yearning please don't walk away song of my heart your love gives me strength, helps me along the way you've always been with me, have been from the start and i know that if you stay we'll be together soon. . . someday ------------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sad sweet poem Sven...full of your loving emotions...hope your heart finds it songbird and its tune again soon take care, jm ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces, you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination... then you turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart...gave me away. glass tiger |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Sad Poem Sven, I hope your heart's song remains to help guide you. Best Wishes The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You know me and my love of the minor notes don't you??? I thankyou Sven, I really do, my minor note adagio's will always be close by when or if you need them, my friend There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sven please know I email you every day, I checked my address book and sent messages and they went out fine. I can only presume they were deleted? God, you know me, usually it's twice a day!! Hope we sort this email nonsense out. Love you Isis There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven beautiful and romantic music from your heart. James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
It's the strangest thing....I know your name...but ...this type of poetry is not what I'd exspect from my friend Sven. No he's usaully to busy swooning the ladies for this. However, if this is him.....he certainly knows my email address if he needs me. A beautiful, but sad poem my friend. Marina |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Sven to truly love someone you must let them fly, what good is in chains. A sad and truly touching to the heart music. And thank you for sharing. Joel. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all. . . Janet, I hope so too Daniel, I am led by it every day Isis, thank you my friend James, thank you Marina, I'm not always the charmer that I appear to be. . . sometimes, the pain is great, and thank you Joel, you have hit the nail on the head, thank you ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ as always beautifully written. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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