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Sven
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0 posted 2000-04-04 10:24 PM


the song of my heart plays today in a minor key
an adagio filled with longing and sadness
the sky is darker today without her light to guide me
a flame helping me with my darkness

my heart is broken and filled with this ache
my night has been sleepless, tossing and turning
this pain, my heart, is more than i can take
my day is now filled with sorrow and yearning

please don't walk away song of my heart
your love gives me strength, helps me along the way
you've always been with me, have been from the start
and i know that if you stay
      we'll be together soon. . . someday

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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1 posted 2000-04-04 10:52 PM


sad sweet poem Sven...full of your loving emotions...hope your heart finds it songbird and its tune again soon
take care, jm

 ...when you walked into the room, I saw their faces,
you made it feel like time was standing still...and I felt fascination...
then you turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart...gave me away.
glass tiger

dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-04-05 12:38 PM


Sad Poem Sven,

I hope your heart's song remains to help guide you.

Best Wishes



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-04-05 02:32 AM


You know me and my love of the minor notes don't you???  I thankyou Sven, I really do, my minor note adagio's will always be close by when or if you need them, my friend  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Isis
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Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-04-06 03:03 AM


Sven please know I email you every day, I checked my address book and sent messages and they went out fine.  I can only presume they were deleted?
God, you know me, usually it's twice a day!!
Hope we sort this email nonsense out.
Love you
Isis

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-04-06 03:34 PM


Sven beautiful and romantic music from your heart.  James
Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
6 posted 2000-04-07 01:54 AM


It's the strangest thing....I know your name...but ...this type of poetry is not what I'd exspect from my friend Sven.  No he's usaully to busy swooning the ladies for this.  However, if this is him.....he certainly knows my email address if he needs me.
A beautiful, but sad poem my friend.

Marina

Joel the wolf
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Angels Camp
7 posted 2000-04-07 02:09 AM


Sven to truly love someone you must let them fly, what good is in chains.
A sad and truly touching to the heart music.
And thank you for sharing.
Joel.

Sven
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8 posted 2000-04-07 11:19 PM


thank you all. . .

Janet, I hope so too

Daniel, I am led by it every day

Isis, thank you my friend

James, thank you

Marina, I'm not always the charmer that I appear to be. . . sometimes, the pain is great, and thank you

Joel, you have hit the nail on the head, thank you
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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
9 posted 2000-04-08 02:00 AM


Sven~
as always beautifully written.
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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