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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
For your love, I'd do anything. For your love, I'd even die. For your love, I'd make you happy, For I couldn't make you cry. For your love, I'd understand. For your love, I'd risk my life. For your love, I'd always be with you, For I could take away your strife. For your love, I'd hold your hand. For your love, I'd respect you. For your love, I'd defend your life. For what else am I to do? Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Good work here! The last stanza kinda confused me, but the first and second ones were awesome. Keep writing. |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Shadow~ This is a great poem.Its sad but sometimes there is nothing else we can do.You can only be who you are and only do the things your capable of doin' Good Luck ~Angie  |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
ShadowHeart, A good poem. We all would do anything for the love of that one special person. I hope you receive it. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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DziR Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 11Sydney, Australia |
Your poem is fantastic. I have found that many people on here can relate to each other, and express feelings that we are quite often afraid to express them out loud. I hope tht the person you feel so strong about feels the same as you and that you both find each other!! Keep writing I look forward to more of your poems!!! |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I love it...so expressive! I hope to see more of your work soon! "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I also would have given, and did so much more, my heart, my soul. But is it a two pillar bridge? or a single span.? Very well put, simple and to the point. Thank you. Joel. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very, very lyrical....very sweeping and simple and I love your name "Shadowheart" Kathleen |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ShadowHeart~ this felt sad to me, like the love you are giving isn't given back to you....hope I'm wrong...Great writting  -SEA |
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