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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-04-03 12:39 PM


You come like a dream
and leave like a nightmare
you give me your love
only to take it away
you show me that you care
only to deny me of yourself
we shared the passion once before
why not share it once again?
Love me like you use to
Don't be a stranger like you once were,
Show me the feelings that u felt in the past,
Let there be a future between us,
Let there be you and I,
Remember the first time we met,
Two total strangers looking for love,
let us not go back to that time,
I cannot take the pain any longer,
Why must you deny me of your love?
Do you see how you bleed when you cut yourself?
That is the way my heart bleeds when you stop loving me,
Why must you end what we have between us?
No reason, no explanation,no notice that u have left me,
I don't want to lose your love,
or your special touch,
I can't live without the smell your hair in my face,
and without your lips on my lips,
without your hand in my hand,
without your love in my heart,
and without your soul with my soul,
let there be love where it once was,
coping with emptiness all this time
from which I can't seem to unwind,
Why can't you be kind?
as you break this bind,
The bind that was made,
by none other than ourselves.



 Ronil (the one and lonely)

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
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1 posted 2000-04-03 12:47 PM


This is beautiful. I've been asking myself that same question why a lot. I never find the right answer though. Good Luck
dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-04-03 01:01 AM


Superb!  I was overwhelmed with emotions while reading this one.  I have wondered why as well, still the answer remain out of my grasp, but in time all will be revealed.



 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-04-03 01:17 AM


Welcome Xeonox, I was away for a few days, my little one has been sick.  So didn't get to say hi until now.
This was wonderful work, we all wonder why?
Pity we don't get the answers more often huh?  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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