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just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-04-02 03:31 PM

I'm not sorry that I love you
and yes I've thought it through.
But I'm sorry for the pain
love has brought to me and you.
I' sorry for the friends i've lost.
They didn't approve of you.
And i'm sorry for the girls you lost.
I'm sure there has been a few.
I'm sorry that I stayed so long
getting my heart broken by you.
I'm sorry that i tried so hard
when you didn't want me to.
I'm sorry that I told your girlfriends
about the things we shared.
I'm sorry that I was ever here
believing that you cared.
I'm sorry for all the trouble I caused.
I'm sorry that it couldn't be.
But most of all I'm sorry that
you wouldn't let yourself love me.

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2000-04-02 03:51 PM

Great poem! I too know the feeling of ur words here. Saying good bye is a hard thing to do. But sometimes needed.
Once again, great work

Peace

I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

2 posted 2000-04-02 10:26 PM

Good Poem.

  ~"I'm sorry that it couldn't be.
  But most of all I'm sorry that
  you wouldn't let yourself love me."~

Their loss just_another, to turn down someone that loves and cares...

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

3 posted 2000-04-03 01:10 AM

all you can do is love. if someone cannot return your feelings, you can only love them anyway, i suppose. this was very sad, but very nice as well.
jann elizabeth

Love is so short, and forgetting so long.
-Pablo Neruda

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

4 posted 2000-04-03 01:55 AM

great job you've captured emotions I've felt and thought a time or two and very vividly at that

Mystical being
which makes ink flow
Surround me in
your incandescent glow
Fill my brain with
thoughts and rhyme
As I try to capture
but a moment in time
~Shan~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-04-03 02:22 AM

I believe the first line and the last line say it all...enjoyed the way you fit this all together. James

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

6 posted 2000-04-03 09:41 PM

Thanx for reading everyone and thanx for the kind words and advice

luv you guyz

alla ya

[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 04-03-2000).]

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

7 posted 2000-04-03 09:56 PM

I can relate well to this one.

My empathies here. Good poem, though.

Michael

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