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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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I live my life So shelterd So hopeless You tell me your care You comfort me But I don't care What you think It doesn't matter to me I may go on That doesn't mean I want to To go on But you don't always Get what you want Tho I.... -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
This is indeed a very sad poem. I like the brevity as it adds to the impact. Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
I agree this is a very sad but very good poem.I like the format you used  |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Hello, I am glad you liked it! Thanks for read it! -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
A sad poem. I enjoyed reading it and found some of my old thoughts within.. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
there's always a part of any poem that you can relate to... "It doesn't matter to me I may go on That doesn't mean I want to To go on" good work... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Great work Neala  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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